2008年1月30日水曜日

Suggestion for Successors

I thought, the most important is continue to use the computer everyday. I dislike typing words. And, I could not type fast. But, I used my computer everyday.

And, next important is writing words. First, I wrote about interesting things. I wrote about my favorite soccer team. I wrote the team's score and player's information. Also, I wrote way to make dinner. And, I put those photos on my blog. Gradually, I could type many words. And, I could type fast.

Last advice is continue to practice. I practiced to Typing Speed Trial everyday. I used teacher's sites. Time limit is five minutes. This time limit was very difficult for me. But, I tried typing many words at many times. Gradually I could type various themes. I will continue to use my computer. And, I sometimes want to use English. This writing class was hard for me. But, I thought this writing class was important class for me. Thank you very much.
[162 words]

2008年1月16日水曜日

Typing

I like typing. I often use my computer. But, I can not type fast. I often watch to sites. I don’t type. But, I type many words on my blog during four month. So, I became fast. But, I should get more vocabularies. I like sports. So, I want to write diary about sports every day. First, I should do interesting things. Then, I think my typing become faster.
[69 words]

2008年1月15日火曜日

Writing IVc: Portfolio

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Student ID: 04220
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
fn
Indices
Book reviews 0
0
9
6
3
0
18
0.20

Blog posts 0
4
20
32
28
7
91
0.20

Words 0
163
2,671
3,155
2,535
264
8,788
0.23

TOTAL
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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase
Short
titles
[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12

Kumamoto

07.10.10
5

863

words

1
3
3
1

Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26

My favorite place to relax

07.10.26
5

367

words






Movie
review
07.11.11

TOY STORY

07.11.09
6

354

words

3
1



Community
life
07.11.25

Flower arrangement

07.11.24
7

466

words

1

2


TV in
Japan
07.12.09

NHK's world

07.12.06
6

398

words


3
3


Learning w/
computers
07.12.21

Learning with Computers

07.12.14
7

386

words

6
1
2






















Totals---
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36

2,834

words

11
8
10
1
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • My best essay is 5th essay. The title is NHK'S world. I could include three photos and three links. And, I could examine particularities.

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics.

07.12.12
16

good

comment

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

Kumamoto


07.10.10

28

concise

comment

2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

Flower arrangement

07.12.05
49

good

comment

2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

Learning with Computers

07.12.19
96

good

comments

2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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08.01.16
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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8

Classmates gave me good points about my essay.

I replied to them by thanks.

2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

Drive!!

07.10.10
10

good

comment

2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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08.01.16
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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7

She invited me to drive.

I responded to appointment.






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • ... I'm displaying all comments under each post on my blog.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • I was glad to receive comments. I felt my blog understood by them.
    But, I lacked giving comments. I had to give more comments.


3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*

45 words

07.09.26
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
134 words
07.12.18
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
89 words
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 84

07.12.12

07.12.18

08.01.16




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01

Orca

07.10.09
87
0
2-02

Oranges in the snow

07.10.11
97
2
2-03

Give us the Money

07.10.14
106
0
2-04

THE WHITE STONES

07.10.15
90
0
2-05

Lucky Break

07.10.18
69
0
2-06

Robin HOOD

07.10.19
49
0
2-07

HANNAH AND THE HURRICANE

07.10.23
56
0
2-08

The Blue Cat Club

07.10.29
53
0
2-09

Billy and the Queen

07.10.31
61
0
2-10

DEAD MAN’S RIVER

07.11.08
62
0
2-11

THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE

07.11.13
76
0
2-12

THE WHITE ORYX

07.11.19
152
0
2-13

Marcel and the White Star

07.11.20
185
0
2-14

Mike’s Lucky Day

07.11.26
163
0
2-15

The Missing Coins

07.11.27
175
0
2-16

Between two worlds

07.12.04
168
0
2-17

The last photo

07.12.07
187
0
2-18

The Fireboy

07.12.09
173
0










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TOTALS:
2,009
2
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • My best book review is 2-18. The title is The Fireboy. I could read perfect, also I could read fast. And, I could write brevity.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
o

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? o

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? o

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

o

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?o

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
o

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
o

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
o

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
o

  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
o

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? o

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • 3 other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • diary (70)
    • recipe (12)
    • sports (15)
    • zzz (p)
    • ...
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? o

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
o

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • 3 posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? o

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • 3 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? o

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • 1 posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ... Soccer
    2. ...
    3. ...

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ... I used many photos on my blog because it becomes interesting.
  2. ... I devised a title on my blog for visitors.
  3. ... I divided various labels because make clear blog.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ... I often put about my favorite soccer team on my blog.
  • ... I often introduced recipe on my blog. Additionally, I introduced those photos.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ... I think successors can make prettier layout.
  • ... I think successors can apply Google or Yahoo. They can get more information.

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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2008年1月6日日曜日

♪Hokkaido♪


My grandmother returned safe to Kumamoto from Hokkaido. My grandmother took a trip to Hokkaido. I got souvenirs from her. The famous sweet is "Shiroi koibito". We can eat it again. And, one more souvenir is Kitty's pen. This is limited goods. It is so pretty!!
Thanks my grandmother!!
[49 words]

2008年1月5日土曜日

Cake


I ate famous cake today. There is the shop in Fukuoka. The shop makes a specialty of tarte. This photo is menu list. Those cakes use a lot of fruits. I ate “Red fruit tarte".
Those cake uses strawberry, blueberry and raspberry etc. It was very delicious.
[47 words]

2008年1月3日木曜日

♪Miffi♪


I went to "Miffi exhibition" today. I went to there with my sister and my niece. This photo is Miffi. There were Miffi's friends and Miffi's house in this exhibition. We took a lot of pictures there. My niece enjoyed playing.
[41 words]

2008年1月2日水曜日

☆Luther☆


There was high school soccer championship today. Kumamoto's delegate is Luther high school. I have been at this high school. I cheered them. They did their best, but they lost.
I thought, the game was good match. Luther is my pride.

Greeting♪

I went to my grandfather's house with my family. We ate Osechi and Ozouni. After, we paid homage at a shrine. I and my sister got handsel.
Thank you!! Grandfather and Grandmother.
[32 words]

2008年1月1日火曜日

Congratulation☆

Today was Tennouhai's final. The game was Kashima versus Hiroshima. Uchida's goal was splendid!! Hiroshima fell down to J2 this season. But, they stayed final game. Winner was Kashima but, Hiroshima was splendid.
[33 words]

♪A Happy New Year♪


A Happy New Year
I spent the New Year holidays with my family. I hope this year will become good year.
[21 words]